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 <section name="2.3 Installation" anchor="install">
-<p>Blah, blah, blah.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.3.1 Downloading the Latest Release" anchor="download_release">
 <p>We recommend that most users run the <a href="http://jakarta.apache.org/builds/jakarta-jmeter/release/">latest release</a>.</p>
-<p>To install from a release build, simply unzip the zip/tar file into the directory
+<p>To install a release build, simply unzip the zip/tar file into the directory
-where you want JMeter to be installed.  Provided you have a JDK correctly installed,
+where you want JMeter to be installed.  Provided that you have a JDK correctly installed
-and JAVA_HOME environment variable set, there is nothing more to do.</p>
+and the JAVA_HOME environment variable set, there is nothing more for you to do.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.3.2 Downloading Nightly Builds" anchor="download_nightly">
 <p>If you do not mind working with beta-quality software, then you can download and run the <a href="http://jakarta.apache.org/builds/jakarta-jmeter/nightly">latest nightly build</a>.</p>
-<p>To install from a nightly build, you must build JMeter.  To do so, unzip the zip/tar file into the directory where you want JMeter
+<p>To install a nightly build, unzip the zip/tar file into the directory where you want JMeter
-to be installed.  Then, open a shell or command prompt and change directory to JMeter's top
+to be installed.  Then, open a shell or command prompt and change to JMeter's top-level directory.  
-level directory.  Next, type "build install" to install JMeter.  Provided your system has
+Next, type "build install".  Provided that you have a JDK correctly installed
-a JDK correctly installed and the JAVA_HOME environment variable set, JMeter should
+and the JAVA_HOME environment variable set, JMeter should be installed successfully.</p>
-install correctly.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.4 Running JMeter" anchor="running">
 <p>To run JMeter, run the jmeter.bat (for Windows) or jmeter (for Unix) file.</p>
 
 <p>If JMeter does not start correctly, it may be because your system does not support
-the commands contained in jmeter.bat/jmeter.  In this case,
+the commands contained in jmeter.bat/jmeter.  If this is the case,
- you will need to rewrite the jmeter.bat/jmeter file to explicitly include all
+you will need to rewrite the jmeter.bat/jmeter file to explicitly include all
- jar files found in JMeter's lib/ directory in JMeter's classpath.</p>
+JAR files that are located in JMeter's "lib" directory in the JMeter classpath.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.4.1 JMeter's Classpath" anchor="classpath">
-<p>The jmeter.bat/jmeter file automatically adds all jar files found in JMeter's lib/
+<p>The jmeter.bat/jmeter file automatically adds all JAR files that are located in JMeter's "lib"
-directory.  Because of this, if you need to add your own or third party jar files to
+directory to JMeter's classpath.  If you want to add other JAR files to JMeter's classpath, then 
-JMeter's classpath, it is only required that you copy them into JMeter's lib/
+you must copy them to JMeter's "lib" directory.</p>
-directory. </p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.4.2 Using a Proxy Server" anchor="proxy_server">
-<p>If you are testing a system behind a firewall, you may need to tell JMeter to
+<p>If you are testing from behind a firewall/proxy server, you may need to provide JMeter with
-use a proxy server.  To do so, use the jmeter.bat/jmeter file from a command line to start
+the firewall/proxy server hostname and port number.  To do so, run the jmeter.bat/jmeter file 
-JMeter, and include two options:<br/>
+from a command line with the following parameters:</p>
--h [proxy server hostname or ip address]<br/>
+<p>-h [proxy server hostname or ip address]<br/>
--p [proxy server port]<br/>
+-p [proxy server port]</p>
-<b>eg.</b>: jmeter -h my.proxy.server -p 8000
+<p><b>Example</b>: jmeter -h my.proxy.server -p 8000</p>
-</p>
 </section>
 
 <section name="2.4.3 Non-GUI Mode" anchor="non_gui">
-<p>To run JMeter without the GUI, invoke the nongui.bat/nongui.sh files from the
+<p>For non-interactive testing, you may choose to run JMeter without the GUI. Run the 
-command line, with the -o option (-o [name of *.jmx file that describes entire test script]).<br/>
+nongui.bat/nongui.sh script has one required parameter:</p>
-<b>eg:</b> nongui -o my_test.jmx -h [proxy server] -p [proxy port]</p>
+<p>-o [name of JMX file that contains the Test Plan].</p>
+<p>The script also lets you specify the optional firewall/proxy server information:</p>
+<p>-h [proxy server hostname or ip address]<br/>
+-p [proxy server port]</p>
+<p><b>Example</b>: nongui -o my_test.jmx -h my.proxy.server -p 8000</p>
 </section>
 
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