From 12506fa9b74d1e436ef4b07758af3ea75839dc8e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Keith Donald <kdonald@vmware.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Feb 2010 15:38:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] comments about tutorials

git-svn-id: https://src.springframework.org/svn/spring-framework/trunk@2942 50f2f4bb-b051-0410-bef5-90022cba6387
---
 spring-framework-reference/src/mvc.xml             | 11 ++++-------
 spring-framework-reference/src/new-in-3.xml        | 11 +++++------
 spring-framework-reference/src/web-integration.xml | 10 +++-------
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/spring-framework-reference/src/mvc.xml b/spring-framework-reference/src/mvc.xml
index 72fc1e14393..fbe7047a32e 100644
--- a/spring-framework-reference/src/mvc.xml
+++ b/spring-framework-reference/src/mvc.xml
@@ -3128,13 +3128,10 @@ public class SimpleController {
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>The Spring distribution ships with a Spring Web MVC tutorial
-        that guides the reader through building a complete Spring Web
-        MVC-based application using a step-by-step approach. This tutorial is
-        available in the <literal>docs</literal> directory of the Spring
-        distribution. An online version can also be found on the <ulink
-        url="http://springframework.org/">Spring Framework
-        website</ulink>.</para>
+        <para>
+			There are many excellent articles and tutorials that show how to build web applications with Spring MVC. 
+			Read them at the <ulink url="http://www.springsource.org/documentation">Spring Documentation</ulink> page.
+		</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
diff --git a/spring-framework-reference/src/new-in-3.xml b/spring-framework-reference/src/new-in-3.xml
index ca0bf4e430d..6fcddd345b5 100644
--- a/spring-framework-reference/src/new-in-3.xml
+++ b/spring-framework-reference/src/new-in-3.xml
@@ -57,13 +57,12 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="new-in-3-new-tutorial">
-    <title>New getting started tutorial</title>
+    <title>New articles and tutorials</title>
 
-    <para>There is now a new getting started tutorial for developing a basic
-    Spring 3.0 MVC web application. This tutorial is a separate document that
-    can be found at the <ulink
-    url="http://www.springsource.org/documentation"> Spring
-    Documentation</ulink> page.</para>
+    <para>
+		There are many excellent articles and tutorials that show how to get started with Spring 3 features.
+		Read them at the <ulink url="http://www.springsource.org/documentation">Spring Documentation</ulink> page.
+	</para>
 
   </section>
 
diff --git a/spring-framework-reference/src/web-integration.xml b/spring-framework-reference/src/web-integration.xml
index 821582abb9e..06b97ad0fc7 100644
--- a/spring-framework-reference/src/web-integration.xml
+++ b/spring-framework-reference/src/web-integration.xml
@@ -556,13 +556,9 @@
         </quote>
     </para>
 
-    <para>WebWork is (in the opinion of this author) a very clean, elegant web
-    framework. Its architecture and key concepts are very easy to
-    understand, and the framework also has a rich tag library as well as
-    nicely decoupled validation. It
-    is (again, in the opinion of this author) quite easy to be productive in
-    next to no time at all (the documentation and tutorials are pretty good
-    too).</para>
+    <para>Web work's architecture and concepts are easy to
+    understand, and the framework also has an extensive tag library as well as
+    nicely decoupled validation.</para>
 
     <para>One of the key enablers in WebWork's technology stack is <ulink
     url="http://www.opensymphony.com/webwork/wikidocs/IoC%20Overview.html">an